The Animal Has Arrived

[The Killer Animal]

The sence opens up to Sophie Amundsen standing next to The Killer Animal

Sophie Amundsen: This is Sophie Amundsen here with one of LDWA's newest superstars. So The Killer Animal What brings you to LDWA?


TKA:What brings every superstar here? Itd eitherone of three things. First thing is they are here to prove somethign to some one their mother, their second grade teacher ect. ect. Second thing is they are after gold they wanna be in the spot light. and finally they like it hurt people, hurt them so bad they cant move!


Sophie Amundsen: Ok so which one brings you here?


TKA: Well Sophie All three but the first and The third one more then the rest. Because i am gonna prove that i am one of the most vicouse person to ever step foot in a ring and after im Done with Rusty Cage tonight there will be no doubt that i should be feared and taht no one should stand in my way!


Sophie Amundsen: Oh wow i see. Sounds like its gonna be painful.


TKA: Oh yes it will be because after im done with Rusty Cage im gonna pick threw the LDWA roster one by one untill they Give me what i diserve and they know that i am not to be reckond with.


Sophie Amundsen: Any thing else you wanna get off your chest big fella?


TKA:Nope thats all i gotta say for now

The Killer Aniaml walks out of view

Sophie Amundsen: Well im Sophie Amundsen and we will be back after a short commercial break


The sence closes with Sophie walking away


OOC:Sorry my spelling aint all that greta and its been a few months since iv RPed but tell me what you think and tell me what you think would help me improve

[John yuma]

Basically the spelling is what you need to improve on.

That, and the use of certain words over others.

I.E People instead of person. ETC

Keep at it and you will improve continuously.

Good work

Regards,

JDM

[Cobrita]

Quality introduction Big things to come for the killer animal

[John yuma]

P.S Cobrita is god