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Post by hancocker on Apr 23, 2009 15:59:59 GMT -5
We come to a scene in a dark room where the camera focuses in on a shaded figure in the back who is looking to the side, but turns his way towards the camera. Its the Proeliator in his ring gear with a pair of shades and his trademark trench coat.
Pro:~ They say that every great man has to have something to live or die for, has to overcome some sort of adversity, has to show where he stands. They say that the loners will be cast out and the small will seek to follow the stars. They say a man must prove himself when the chips are down and there's nothing but the world against him. Magnus, you proved to me beyond a shadow of a doubt you have the instincts of a natural survivor and you do what it takes, but we're not through, no not yet. I will avenge myself, I will not be forgotten.
The dark warrior moves to the side, sitting in a chair placed next to him as he continues.
Pro:~ This brings me to tonight. Its the beginning of the new era in LDWA, where we separate the boys from the men, the lions from the hyenas, the wheat from the chaff. Where we decide who moves into the tournament for the Lion's Pride Championship. Tonight I face a man who has never had an opponent show to his matches here, which makes me believe its fixed, but that's beside the point. The point, is that you're another obstacle in my path, and you my friend will taste my wrath. As it is written, so shall it be done.
The camera fades out as we head to a commercial break
EOT
Comments as always are welcomed
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Post by blackdragondraven on Apr 23, 2009 17:36:00 GMT -5
Nice short and o the point I like that in a promo and I think you just got your self a catch phrase with "As it is written, so shall it be done." but tht is just me. like I said good work
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Post by nakedgirls on Apr 23, 2009 20:00:48 GMT -5
It was a good little rant and i liked it people think for it to be a good promo it has to be a novel it doesn't and i learned that real quick like Draven said it was short, sweet and to the point. well written
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Post by hancocker on Apr 23, 2009 22:41:03 GMT -5
Thanks guys
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Post by thepurest on Apr 24, 2009 1:13:29 GMT -5
Nice...very nice. For me to critique your performance at this time would be disrespectful so instead I'll stick with--Very nice.
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Post by hancocker on Apr 24, 2009 1:27:45 GMT -5
How would it be disrespectful? you can pm it to me if you wish, I don't mind
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